Final/ Rational

Final Class

A group of us printed out our posters at A2 size and had a group critique. I was told to look at making my tag line 'words kill' larger and to look at increasing the overall size of the text and increase the gap between sentences. They also suggested that I look at making some of my words larger then other so its more dynamic and you have words jumping out at you.

Critique

Told that instead of the text being hand made that I should use the actual Facebook font. They said I should also use the colours of the glove etc. So I tried it out and Im impressed with it. I will develop it further.

Typographic Posters/ Images

Developing Final

I decided to go ahead with the thumbs up idea over the 'you don't know wow talking to your kids online'. I felt that I had more ideas and inspiration from the thumbs up idea. Right now I'm trying some hand drawn thumbs up that I am about to start making on either photoshop or illustrator more likely illustrator.

Interim Critique

I got good feedback from the group. They told me several things I could work on with a couple of my ideas and the other two they told me to scrap because they weren't as strong.

My two strongest were my thumbs down made out of text and my creepy paedaphile talking to your kids posters. I was told that to improve my thumbs down poster into something stronger to make it a thumbs up and make the text clearer, maybe not overlapping. 

Some inspiration images. At the moment I'm looking at something like you don't know who your kids are talking to online or something to do with Facebook, ill probably develop ideas from both and see where to go from there